The Sub Male Lead of This Novel is Strange

Honestly, why do I have to start over a line making much of how the traditional BL top looks like. I get it, he's that big fish to catch but to sneak that in every little sentences possible... This feels badly run through to crank up a half-baked disparaging romance. The OG main couple is just as bad. It's forced than congenial, like actors ill-suited to their roles, commercial barbie dolls done for shows, they don't dig deeper but talk about love in a shallow mood. If it's written off in something see-through, ML's whole personality is everything about his looks while MC acted like he'd only seen a man for the first time. Them coming together seems a lie they just don't hit it off. Or maybe I'm too critical more than is fitting for.

dslaein

ML has more mood swings then a teen

sorenthereader