She Loves You with Guilt

Draft One: Jiang Yun crouched before Xu Qinrou, showing no trace of fear but rather a heartache that shouldn’t be—this person shouldn’t have gone to such lengths for her, it wasn’t worth it. Tears welled up in her eyes, shimmering as they fell. Jiang Yun’s hands were covered in a glaring red, some parts already drying, others clotted and hardened. She wanted to reach out and touch the girl who had endured such peril, but thinking better of it, she slowly withdrew her hand. She was too filthy; she must not taint the girl before her. "Hello, I want to turn myself in." "Room 611, Taiyuan Hotel, Chenhui Road, downtown. Yes, that’s right." Draft Two: The girl who had once kept her distanc...