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Huh! The Crime System Can Be Used Like This?
I've only read three chapters so far, but a few things really aren't working for me. 1. There's way too much vagueness where there shouldn't be. In chapter 3, this guy suddenly thinks the MC is connected to a murder, but we never learn why. We only see the Director reacting to him, not what he actually said. All he got was a video of her acting... so how on earth did that make him think she killed someone? 2. Because of that, the logic feels all over the place. 3. The vagueness also kills any tension. Why should I care that some guy thinks the MC is tied to a murder? He comes off as unhinged in the chapter, so the moment doesn't land at all. Edit: 3/10 it keeps not mentioning necessary stuff, and gliding over important stuff.
The Beautiful and Strong Tragic Ex-Girlfriend [Quick Transmigration]
I'm only on chapter 5, but I already have some thoughts. The descriptions feel very melodramatic, which makes the story hard to read at times. I'm also almost certain the MC is actually the OG character. For example: She cautiously recalled Jiang Beiyuan's preferences, staying up all night to compile a detailed summary table, which she then sent to Fu Yanzhou to show how dedicated she was to the job. I don't know how she could know this about the FL. You could argue she knows because of the system, but the story never mentions that explicitly. Her emotional reactions toward the FL also don't feel like acting. If this is meant to be a twist, I realized it around chapter 2-3, which makes the buildup feel underwhelming so far.
I Became the Ice Princess Who Cannot Be Defeated
I've read 10 chapters so far and it feels quite aimless. In all those chapters, only 2 days pass in the story, so it might be due to the pacing, but either way, it's not ideal.
Male and Female Reversal High School Pure Love
9/10 it's good across the board with just a few flaws. It's good enough that you overlook them, but they're still there, so i can't give it a 10/10. What the author does well is the romance and how the gender reversal isn't just background noise, it's actually central to the story, and you can tell the author put real thought into it. The main issue though is that the love interest keeps denying her feelings even when it's obvious she's into the MC, and after a while it just stops seeming logical that she doesn't realize her feelings.
Becoming a Scum A in an Old-School Melodramatic Novel
I was interested at first because she wakes up in a trashy person’s body, poor and distrusted, needing to raise a child. I wanted to see how she’d survive and earn trust. But once she becomes rich and everyone accepts her, the story loses all tension. The romance doesn’t add enough either. There’s no real struggle or emotional conflict to drive the plot, so nothing keeps me wanting to continue.
A Lie Has Turned Into Reality
There's nothing particularly wrong with this web novel so far, but I just can't keep reading it. The MC's attention-seeking behaviour is uncomfortable to watch, even though it isn't hurting any characters; it just bothers me every time I read it.
The Broken Hero's Rehab Therapist
5/10 what's with chapters 36? When did she even fall in love with him? Maybe i'm missing something, but i don't remember any real build up. Then there's this: 'Teacher Hope left to see other patients. Even though I'm in so much pain. Even though I can't do anything without the teacher...' when was she ever a yandere? It just felt so random and pulled me out of the story. Since then, I haven't been able to immersive myself again because of this the shift feels too illogical. The pacing is also uneven. Too much happens at once for anything to actually sink in, yet there are moments where it drags and nothing seems to move forward.
Daily Life of a Scumbag Man Giving Birth
The author must hate men or something because the only reason the MC exists is to suffer, the love interest is trash and i despise her she does everything just to make MC resemble her first love, even if the MC doesn't want to, the author wrote this book for female empowerment or something, but you don't empower a gender by dragging down the other, i'm a women and i find it disgusting that the author thinks that this is empowering, you're just replacing the women from the past with men.
After saving the paranoid heroine [Quick Travel]
I liked it at first because the main character having disabilities in each world seemed interesting, but my enjoyment faded. There's no real conflict: the relationships aren't toxic, her legs get healed, and her insecurity disappears. Even leaving the love interest isn't a problem because some contrived solution removes the obstacle. World-hopping stories often repeat themes, but here the core theme becomes pointless since she'll just be healed every time.
I Became My Own Stand-in After Returning from the Book
After reading a different novel, I’ve gained a new perspective on how trashy the love interest is. If you really think about it, she’s just using the MC, forcing her to act like her first love and giving her things that only her first love liked. Yes, we know the MC is actually her first love, but she doesn’t. So, like I said, she’s using the MC even when it hurts the MC, even when the MC doesn’t want it. Because of that, I’m dropping this. The love interest is just too much of a scumbag.
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