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After Faking My Death, the Female Lead Descended into Demonic Cultivation
5/10 This drags, and because of that, it's tiring to read. E.g: action > how the action looks > how the character felt about it. Don't get me wrong, this is fine when used in the right places, but it's constantly used. I don't need a description of how every action the MC makes appears, nor do I need it to then tell me the love interest's opinion on how that action looks for instance it's kinda like this: 1 lifted her leg, 1's leg was so pretty, when 2 saw this her heart fluttered. I'm not kidding this is used for every action she takes.
Hey! The Criminal Assistance System Can Even Be Used Like This?
I've only read three chapters so far, but a few things really aren't working for me. 1. There's way too much vagueness where there shouldn't be. In chapter 3, this guy suddenly thinks the MC is connected to a murder, but we never learn why. We only see the Director reacting to him, not what he actually said. All he got was a video of her acting... so how on earth did that make him think she killed someone? 2. Because of that, the logic feels all over the place. 3. The vagueness also kills any tension. Why should I care that some guy thinks the MC is tied to a murder? He comes off as unhinged in the chapter, so the moment doesn't land at all. Edit: 3/10 it keeps not mentioning necessary stuff, and gliding over important stuff.
The Beautiful and Strong Tragic Ex-Girlfriend [Quick Transmigration]
I'm only on chapter 5, but I already have some thoughts. The descriptions feel very melodramatic, which makes the story hard to read at times. I'm also almost certain the MC is actually the OG character. For example: She cautiously recalled Jiang Beiyuan's preferences, staying up all night to compile a detailed summary table, which she then sent to Fu Yanzhou to show how dedicated she was to the job. I don't know how she could know this about the FL. You could argue she knows because of the system, but the story never mentions that explicitly. Her emotional reactions toward the FL also don't feel like acting. If this is meant to be a twist, I realized it around chapter 2-3, which makes the buildup feel underwhelming so far.
I Became the Ice Princess Who Cannot Be Defeated
I've read 10 chapters so far and it feels quite aimless. In all those chapters, only 2 days pass in the story, so it might be due to the pacing, but either way, it's not ideal.
After Transmigrating Into A Cannon Fodder Character, I Only Want To Survive
I'm trying to read more of this but their age gap just makes me uncomfortable, she's legit her guardian, everyone thinks of her as the love interest's guardian, i can't ignore that even if i try, another thing i don't like, i know the love interest knows the MC isn't the OG person, but still how can you fall in love with someone who looks like the person who caused you trauma??? I know for a fact that if I even saw a glimpse of the person who caused me trauma, I would be trembling, so how could you even fall in love????
Male and Female Reversal High School Pure Love
9/10 is good overall with minor flaws that are overlooked since the story's strengths outweigh them. The author excels at portraying romance and integrating gender reversal as central to the story, clearly showing thought. The main problem is the love interest's denial of her feelings despite obvious attraction, which becomes illogical over time. It becomes weird when her attractiveness is discussed alongside mentions that she is/looks to be a minor. The story gets an 6/10, and the inclusion of sex scenes also feels strange.
Just Retrieve It, That’s It
2/10 This story is so fast-paced that in three chapters, you just get a barrage of info dumps about the abilities of all the races, like humans, elves, orcs, dwarves, and beastkin. It continues to be just info dumping even after that. By now, I feel like I'm just reading character designs for the races rather than a proper book, and in just five chapters, they've already jumped from the dinosaur era to the medieval era. Another example is a simulation game on 10x speed that only explains key info. That works for games, but not books. Doing this in a book makes it hard to care, as readers get no emotional depth or sense of how characters became who they are, only the final result, with no buildup, context, or attachment forming at all ever.
Becoming a Scum A in an Old-School Melodramatic Novel
5/10 I was interested at first because she wakes up in a trashy person’s body, poor and distrusted, needing to raise a child. I wanted to see how she’d survive and earn trust. But once she becomes rich and everyone accepts her, the story loses all tension. The romance doesn’t add enough either. There’s no real struggle or emotional conflict to drive the plot, so nothing keeps me wanting to continue.
A Lie Has Turned Into Reality
There's nothing particularly wrong with this web novel so far, but I just can't keep reading it. The MC's attention-seeking behaviour is uncomfortable to watch, even though it isn't hurting any characters; it just bothers me every time I read it.
The Broken Hero's Rehab Therapist
5/10 what's with chapters 36? When did she even fall in love with him? Maybe i'm missing something, but i don't remember any real build up. Then there's this: 'Teacher Hope left to see other patients. Even though I'm in so much pain. Even though I can't do anything without the teacher...' when was she ever a yandere? It just felt so random and pulled me out of the story. Since then, I haven't been able to immersive myself again because of this the shift feels too illogical. The pacing is also uneven. Too much happens at once for anything to actually sink in, yet there are moments where it drags and nothing seems to move forward.
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